For CarlyP.S, this story is about Hansel and Gretel and listening better.
This book was created and published on StoryJumper™
©2014 StoryJumper, Inc. All rights reserved.
Publish your own children's book:
www.storyjumper.com











Once there lived two kids named Hansel and
Gretel. They lived in a straw hut with their
mom. They loved the rain and candy. They
spread crumbs on the floor when they eat it.


Yuck! Rain!
Cool! Rain!( adds cloud to seen)







Beware the witches castle...
Maybe she'll give us candy!When they went to look for dinner, a girl came
screaming out of nowhere. She started to cry. She tried
to say something. After she said it, she left. Hansel and
Gretel knew witches like candy. They started to think
about the witch...

...So they asked their mom about it. They
wanted to be normal and asked to take a walk.
Mom said yes! But also said to not go to any
strange houses. Hansel and Gretel agreed!





Can we?!?!
Oh, fine!
Great!(mom appears)




It is getting dark!
But, we didn't see the house! What to do!They walked through out the day into the woods. It
was getting dark out. Gretel got scared and almost
past out! But, Hansel said to keep walking. Then
later, they fell asleep.




But, look! A gingerbread house appeared in
the middle of nowhere! Hansel and Gretel
thought it belonged to the witch. But, to find
out...
Look!
Who"s house is that?!?!( gretel walks to door)




Ring!( gretel rings doorbell)... Is to ring the doorbell! Gretel rings the bell,
but, nobody answers. Hansel glares at Gretel.
Then, he pushed the door open! Now, they
went inside.



Ha ha!
The home of Hansel and Gretel
A creepy lady came to the house and ringed
the bell. Hansel almost came out until...






Scram, you kids
Hey!... Gretel slammed it open! They noticed the
lady was the witch.

They both tried harder to make her leave but,
the only people who leaved was them. They
ran right home!




Ha ha!
Run!( they go of stage)You've previewed 10 of 16 pages.
To read more:
Click Sign Up (Free)- Full access to our public library
- Save favorite books
- Interact with authors
For CarlyP.S, this story is about Hansel and Gretel and listening better.
This book was created and published on StoryJumper™
©2014 StoryJumper, Inc. All rights reserved.
Publish your own children's book:
www.storyjumper.com











Once there lived two kids named Hansel and
Gretel. They lived in a straw hut with their
mom. They loved the rain and candy. They
spread crumbs on the floor when they eat it.


Yuck! Rain!
Cool! Rain!( adds cloud to seen)







Beware the witches castle...
Maybe she'll give us candy!When they went to look for dinner, a girl came
screaming out of nowhere. She started to cry. She tried
to say something. After she said it, she left. Hansel and
Gretel knew witches like candy. They started to think
about the witch...

...So they asked their mom about it. They
wanted to be normal and asked to take a walk.
Mom said yes! But also said to not go to any
strange houses. Hansel and Gretel agreed!





Can we?!?!
Oh, fine!
Great!(mom appears)- < BEGINNING
- END >
-
DOWNLOAD
-
LIKE(8)
-
COMMENT(7)
-
SHARE
-
SAVE
-
BUY THIS BOOK
(from $3.19+) -
BUY THIS BOOK
(from $3.19+) - DOWNLOAD
- LIKE (8)
- COMMENT (7)
- SHARE
- SAVE
- Report
-
BUY
-
LIKE(8)
-
COMMENT(7)
-
SHARE
- Excessive Violence
- Harassment
- Offensive Pictures
- Spelling & Grammar Errors
- Unfinished
- Other Problem

COMMENTS
Click 'X' to report any negative comments. Thanks!