BEGINNING

Characters: Jaggy the Jaguar: a lone hunter who likes to be alone but still attends jaguar school; bullied for preferring solitude

Savanna: a gentle, patient, and calm lioness

Fireheart: the protective and brave older brother of Savanna, the future king

Setting: The story takes place in a jungle and savanna; the jungle is ruled by Jaggy's big brother, who became king when their parents passed away, while the savanna is ruled by Savanna and Fireheart's mom and dad

MIDDLE

Problem: The savanna is taken over by an evil lion and his lioness

Response: Jaggy volunteers to help and gathers all the big cats and other animals he can; faces obstacles from the evil lion's son, Kopa, who wants to be king after his father, Half Eye, dies

END

Resolution: Jaggy, Savanna, Fireheart, and Kopa find the Tuliza flower to cure Kopa's scar, marking him as evil

Kopa manages to control and resist the evil, becoming the leader of the lion guard using the roar of the elders for good

Jaggy proves himself worthy of being king, becoming the king; Savanna becomes queen

Jaggy, Savanna, Fireheart, and Kopa team up to take down Half Eye, using the power of the roar to defeat him once and for all

Moral: Kopa's transformation shows that redemption is possible, and power can be used for good if one chooses to change.

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The circle of life it rules us all!!!!! There's no need for vengeance those who respect the circle of life!!!!!!!!!!! Will not be exiled!!!

There once was a jaguar named Jaggy he was the king's brother and best friends with princess Savanna and prince Fireheart Jaggy liked to be alone but sometimes he's bullied.

Whenever he is bullied they throw fruit at him and mud and different kinds of nature stuff but in the end he has his brother and friends to comfort him.

But one day Savanna and her brother came looking for help the savanna was taken over by the evil lion Halfeye and his lioness they went looking for help encountering Kopa Halfeye's son seeing he had the mark of evil they could try to save him with Tuliza plant Kopa tries to fight the evil off.

With Kopa succeeding on controlling the evil inside him when he got the Tuliza Savanna and Fireheart were shocked Kopa was their long lost brother!! They thought he was dead and apparently he was the leader of the lion guard!!!!!!!!!

Here's the plan guy's.  Said Jaggy. When we are there Kopa will use the roar to defeat Halfeye once and for all then the ceremony for the new king Kopa.

Finally they defeated Halfeye and Jaggy and Savanna left to the forest Jaggy proven himself king worthy so he had to go back home and his brother was getting older soon he won't be able to take king duty.

The  ceremony was performed for Jaggy to be the new king but when they got to the jungle Jaggy and Savanna told each other their feelings for each other and Savanna became queen and they live happily ever after.