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Everything seems so peaceful in the dino land shall we execute order 176?


Not yet we must wait for the right time! they will fall. the land will be ours hahaha!
Hey Aaron, thanks for your help in defeating the dragons. Yes, no problem. Is there anything else I can help with? "Actually, yes" said the protecter, "there was some noise and disruption in our intel. Can you check it out?" "Sure what location?", asked Aaron. Protector said, "location 86 the mountain of death." "That's weird, I thought it was abandoned 400 years ago. But it is fine I will check it out.", said Aaron the Dino-men are half Dino and half human with gravel-like skin and a wrinkly yet skinny nose. Their big scary mouth is covered by jagged and uneven overlapping teeth. The Dinos have teeth-like spikes throughout their spine with black and bule tips with a funnel like tail above there back legs.
"Gear up we have a mission.", Aaron said, "There was some disruption in the Mountain of Death. We must figure out what is happening. We leave at 9:15 p.m." Soldier Dino's said, "We understand sir!" "Then get ready, go go go!", barked Aaron. "Yes Sir!", resonded Soldier Dino.
"We are here, Command do you copy?", asked Aaron. "Yes sir, we copy, what is it like?", responded Command. "It feels like someone is here. Like a magic spell was cast to keep people away.", Aaron responded. "Ok is it fresh? did they leave?", asked Command. "We have talking and movement.", said Aaron. Aaron whispered, "Dino stop. We have talking."
"If we wait any longer, they might catch on to our secret weapon, and if they find, out we are doomed." said the evil man. "Wait, I hear something. I will be right back. Abort, I whispered. command we are out. heading back to base.", said Aaron.
we need to speak in private Seargent dino.
Yes, Aaron. Meet me in the room.
Hi, thanks for seeing me. sure, no problem what's up?
it is back the thing I feared.
How?
we banished him to the death realm.
I know but I felt his presence like he was at full power it can't be good what they are planning with him.
I agree Aaron but we can't stop him.
unless we use it.
AARON THAT IS FORBIDDEN AND YOU KNOW THAT! But it might be the only way.
BOOM! What is happening? we are under attack! there are too many of them, get in the bunker now! no Aaron the dinos got this said the protecter. we got this, dinos attack. ching! that is one. get the rest. dragons fall back yelled the expert dragon. That is the last one. They will come for you he will destroy you; you stand no chance.

What the heck was that! Aaron exclaimed. Those are killer dinos said protecter. now, I thought they went extinct in 1999 after the great dino, and dragon war Aaron yelled. Aaron exclaimed; we must find who did this and make them pay!

does he know yet whisper the villain. no said the insider. good kept that way we are almost done with project 270 whisper the villain.

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Everything seems so peaceful in the dino land shall we execute order 176?


Not yet we must wait for the right time! they will fall. the land will be ours hahaha!
Hey Aaron, thanks for your help in defeating the dragons. Yes, no problem. Is there anything else I can help with? "Actually, yes" said the protecter, "there was some noise and disruption in our intel. Can you check it out?" "Sure what location?", asked Aaron. Protector said, "location 86 the mountain of death." "That's weird, I thought it was abandoned 400 years ago. But it is fine I will check it out.", said Aaron the Dino-men are half Dino and half human with gravel-like skin and a wrinkly yet skinny nose. Their big scary mouth is covered by jagged and uneven overlapping teeth. The Dinos have teeth-like spikes throughout their spine with black and bule tips with a funnel like tail above there back legs.
"Gear up we have a mission.", Aaron said, "There was some disruption in the Mountain of Death. We must figure out what is happening. We leave at 9:15 p.m." Soldier Dino's said, "We understand sir!" "Then get ready, go go go!", barked Aaron. "Yes Sir!", resonded Soldier Dino.
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