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James:

John: 

"Today, one of my friend invite me to the show tonight. I can't wait to get there. Now is night I'll go there as fast as I can. I don't went to be late I don't like being late. Let's go there so we're not gonna late.

"But when I got there nobody was there I wait and wait and wait but nobody came. When I look left there were so many Tombstones. Than I saw a black cat it appear when I blink and it disappear again. And another time it did not disappear. I was scared and I take some chair to cover the cat.

"James and I run and run because we scare of that black cat. But that cat is always behind me! Then I see the old house, and I go in to there it seem scary.

When I enter that house James disappeared. The cat don't follow me anymore.

"I enter that house without fear. When I got there everything was too quiet. I look every where and I found out that this was a Ghost Island! I still go in that house, and some Ghost almost attack me! Oops, I forget that I have the sword. Then I fight them by two sword they're defeated.

"When I almost go to upstairs one of the ghost call Frankenstein ran away by shouting like this 'ah lo lo lo lo!' But the vampire said 'Come to me my guest I will show where is my room, come and rest.' I thought he is kind I don't really know so let's go.

"When I got up there the vampire gave me some drink and he said 'Now you are in my trap ha ha ha ha,' and I just pick my sword and kill him. Then I Go upstairs.

"I saw who is a controller of the Ghost island, is a Dracula! I take my sword and I fight him but he fly. So I cannot catch him but I remembered what my father have gave to me, is a flying potion. Whatever I drink that potion. Then I fight to him it is really hard to fight him. (Fighting picture will be in the next six pages.)

*take*

*fall*

Ha ha ha ha