
Days have passed since the fall of my planet, I was to late to destroy the power it was my fault. I saw in definition as my planet blow up in flames I ran for my life when they found me when he found me!
Lord M.B as I call him now “BECAUSE HES THE ONE WHO DID THIS!!” He destroyed my home planet he made me lose my only family. I escaped in a pod and landed back on my home planet.
“Commander I will avenge you and save our home planet from destruction” I ran trying to find any survivors but it was just a wasteland every direction I turned too. I finally realize that I was the only one left that I was alone. I did any logical person will do survive. I found some food sources and freshwater in a cave which now I live in oh for the record my name is Tim a Basic name for a kid.
If anyone finds this recording I might be gone or fixed everything but I am sorry for what I have done. Click
“Huh. What have I done.”
“Food has been starting to get rare on this planet and I don’t know how long I can survive without food. Mabey I should go outside and explore for the first time I moved into this cave.”
As Tim was getting ready to go outside but he starts thinking if there are people outside then they should be in a cave just like me. Tim kept that mindset and went off exploring. Meanwhile, a ship in the sky is monitoring the planet closely for any life forms and as a burst of demonic laughter echo the halls of the ship
“MWAHAHAHA MWHAHAHA MWHAHAHA MWHAHAHA!! *cough*cough* Blaaa.
I really should get used to laughing like that” Lord M.B said.
“A sir we should really stop scanning the planet. It’s going to make the bill for are scanner go up a cost. And besides, I’m not sure anyone can survive that attack.”
“silence minion I know he is on that planet I feel it” “so you think that kid who was so close to destroying are plan, is now on that wasteland planet.”
Lord M.B stood and Looked at his minions with a death glare “DON”t make me talk” he said with a demonic voice. Back on the planet, Tim was finding the last scraps of food on the planet. *Crunch* “What was that?” Surprised Tim said. *Crunch*
“there it is again. Hey, you stop right there.” Tim chased the shady figure through the ruins of what was a bustling city, Tim chased the shady figure through two cliff sides and into a cave.
To Tim’s surprisement inside the cave was the whole population of the world. “Hey you there,” someone said the someone pounced on Tim and said, “Who are you.” Tim was startled by the encounter. But relaxing that the man’s voice sounded familiar.
“Commander Surge? Is that you.” Tim said with hope.
“Tim!”
“Yes! Your alive” Tim said with happiness. They both hug each other with relief.
“Commander I’m sorry for failing the mission this is all my fault,” Tim said with grief.
“Tim. It’s not your fault. It’s my fault I shouldn’t put so much pressure on you. Do you forgive me.” Commander Surge said
“Commander. I forgive you, sir.” Tim said.
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Days have passed since the fall of my planet, I was to late to destroy the power it was my fault. I saw in definition as my planet blow up in flames I ran for my life when they found me when he found me!
Lord M.B as I call him now “BECAUSE HES THE ONE WHO DID THIS!!” He destroyed my home planet he made me lose my only family. I escaped in a pod and landed back on my home planet.
“Commander I will avenge you and save our home planet from destruction” I ran trying to find any survivors but it was just a wasteland every direction I turned too. I finally realize that I was the only one left that I was alone. I did any logical person will do survive. I found some food sources and freshwater in a cave which now I live in oh for the record my name is Tim a Basic name for a kid.
If anyone finds this recording I might be gone or fixed everything but I am sorry for what I have done. Click
“Huh. What have I done.”
“Food has been starting to get rare on this planet and I don’t know how long I can survive without food. Mabey I should go outside and explore for the first time I moved into this cave.”
As Tim was getting ready to go outside but he starts thinking if there are people outside then they should be in a cave just like me. Tim kept that mindset and went off exploring. Meanwhile, a ship in the sky is monitoring the planet closely for any life forms and as a burst of demonic laughter echo the halls of the ship
“MWAHAHAHA MWHAHAHA MWHAHAHA MWHAHAHA!! *cough*cough* Blaaa.
I really should get used to laughing like that” Lord M.B said.
“A sir we should really stop scanning the planet. It’s going to make the bill for are scanner go up a cost. And besides, I’m not sure anyone can survive that attack.”
“silence minion I know he is on that planet I feel it” “so you think that kid who was so close to destroying are plan, is now on that wasteland planet.”
Lord M.B stood and Looked at his minions with a death glare “DON”t make me talk” he said with a demonic voice. Back on the planet, Tim was finding the last scraps of food on the planet. *Crunch* “What was that?” Surprised Tim said. *Crunch*
“there it is again. Hey, you stop right there.” Tim chased the shady figure through the ruins of what was a bustling city, Tim chased the shady figure through two cliff sides and into a cave.
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