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                    Teagan's Chapter

Hey there! I'm Teagan Ray Tartal! I was voted to write first in this journal/book thingy. So, I'll start off by saying how much I love horses and all animals. I love riding horses, and love to ride Western. Probably... my favorite rodeo event would be barrel racing, though neck reining is fun too. I have a cat named Twix, and he's a Calico. Anyways, I also have a brother named Connor. He's ten years old, and I'm twelve. I also have a friend named Sydelle, and her sister, Cam. They're nice, but we can be rivals sometimes. Hello?

                       Conner's Chapter

Hi, I'm Conner Max Tartal.  I am 10 years old.  I'm not too "Adventurous" as some people are.  I was talking about my sister, Tegan.  I mean, what is good about out the outdoors? They are filthy and gross.  That's why   I have a pet named Code the lives INSIDE!  He is still alive, and my only friend.  I have 1 sibling.  Tegan.  Oh man, don't get me started on HER!  She can be a bit, well, annoying!  I mean, she's alright, but sometimes I NEED A BREAK FROM HER!  Ya, hear that Tegan?! Hey! 

                                 Sydelle's Chapter

    Hi guys! This is Sydelle Julia Paulaski! I'm twelve years old and friends with Teagan & Conner! Well, for now, just Teagan. I'm a big sports person. I would say I'm good at most sports. Best at basketball, I made 51 points in a game! Serious! I also do track, volleyball, softball, soccer, you name it, I probably play it! I'm not a nerdy type, but most of my grades are like, B+'s. I've got a baby sister. Her name is Luna. And a older sis... Cam! Their my favorite! Well, I'm not gonna be in this book tooo much, but I'll come up upon occasion. Well, I've gotta go do some chores for my mom. I guess it's Cam's turn! Byeee!

                             Cam's Chapter

Hi, This is Cam Paulaski, 14 years old. You probably can tell that my sister is Sydelle Paulaski. She is like good at everything. Probably the best thing I am good at is ballet. Which my sister can not do. She hates it. Hey! Not fair! I also do basketball. Last week Sydelle totally showed up at my practice and started practicing with us. The coach almost made her the junior coach. O great Teagan just showed up. When she shows up I can't hang out with them. But when my friends come over, Sydelle just hangs out with us like she owns the place. Anyway, like I want to hang out with her.

                                    Teagan's Chapter

Howdy! I'm back. So, yeah. I guess I'll tell you the story about how Sydelle and I met, and then Sydelle can explain it in her own words. So to begin, I was at a riding lesson, just working on poles, and such, when this girl walks in. Sydelle. I got off my horse, Courser, and walked over. "Hi" I said. She looked around. 

"Is this where the basketball court is?" She asked. I shook my head. This place was made up of three sections, horseback riding, basketball, and art. "It's over there." I said, pointing in that direction. She nodded, but stayed for a minute to talk. We struck off from there. But lately, are frienship has been off and on with all of the things that we've been busy doing lately. 

                        Sydelle's Chapter

Hey! It's me! Last time we chatted, I talked about my hobbies! Now, I'll tell you my about my family! So first of all, I have my mom & dad. My mom is a gymnastics teacher and my dad is a Marriage Family therapist. Mom's always been true to heart with the gym, and my dad is a pretty good physiologist. I'm just saying! I also have 2 sisters, a 2 year old named Luna, she's so cute, and a 15 year old, Cam. She's...nice. I know her secrets. She has this friend who's a boy named Sam. And, she cheated on a math test! But, I won't tell on her. I'm nice. She does basketball, like me (it runs in the genes), and ballet. She's really good at ballet, just saying. I can't do anything. And, Luna is a little troublemaker. Well, that's my family for ya. 

                            Connor's Chapter

Yeah. Now that Teagan and Sydelle went BEFORE ME, I'll continue on with what I was saying.   I like computers.  I mean I put one on my picture on the first page.  Did no one notice that?  Uh...  I need to go.   Conner!  You need to do your chapter!  Okay, okay.  Yeesh, Tegan getting on my nerves again.  Well, always.  She's never NOT annoyed me.  Tegan, is almost as bad as Sydelle.  Oh, MAN!  Sydelle is just, just, just SO!   Uhhh, I won't tell you. Hey! You're as bad as I am! The only person that I'm REALLY friends with is Jack Haber. My BEST friend!  

                                                Cam's Chapter

My family. My family like is nice and stuff but they have favorites. Sydelle is good at everything and Luna is just cute. So I like to focus on my love life. Last week this dude named Sam went to my basketball game. Afterwards we went to get ice cream together. It wasn't really a date but thank goodness mom didn't find out. Or Sydelle. I am totally busted because I cheated on my math test. It wasn't my fault. Ok maybe it was. I cheated because I didn't study. I was helping Sydelle with her math homework. But of course mom didn't care. The only time mom pays attention is when I get in trouble. Maybe I should get in trouble more often. My dad is trying to talk to me more. It is very awkward. He is asking me who I like and stuff like that. Anyway I am going to take a run with my friend in a couple of minutes. Thank goodness Sydelle can't come. She got in trouble. Hehe

                        Teagan's Chapter

So anyways, after everyone else went, I guess it's my turn to go again. So, now that I talked about how Sydelle and I met, I guess I'll talk more about my life. So, my mom is named Taylor, and she loves horseback riding. But, on the other hand, my dad, Leo is all about hacking and electronics and stuff. That's where Connor get's it from, and that's why we don't get along! Sydelle and I are on one side, and Connor and Cam are on another. Though, Connor doesn't really like Cam, just because he's not social, Sydelle and I put him on the team. So, anywyas, I'll let Sydelle go next so she can explain the story.

                        Sydelle's Chapter

So, Teagan told me to explain to you how this whole "Rivalry" thing happened. So one day (Like, last Saturday) we (Teagan & I) were in the pool thinking of something to do. We were pretty bored. Anyways, the biggest stinker on Earth, Conner, starts shooting us with a water gun. Conner wouldn't stop, so Teagan declared war. Conner was like, "Game On!" Obviously, me and Teagan teamed up, so that left Conner with Cam. We sorted it out and made rules. There we to be 3 games. A watergun fight, nerf gun war, and laser tag We decided to have the watergun fight next Saturday. Teagan and I started game planning of how we are gonna win, because obviously, we are gonna win. At least, I hope we win!

                        Connor's Chapter

          Well, some MANIAC came up with the idea to have a round of wars!  I mean, what "Brilliant"

person came up with that?  I'm teamed up with Cam, and well I'm not so sure about it.  Cam is okay.  But sometimes...  well, I'm not even SURE why I hang out with her.  She just has a magnetic force that just PULLS me to her.  If she didn't have all her "Pretty Ballet" lessons, I wouldn't have nearly ALL of my cuts.  The worst thing about her, well probably her LIPSTICK!   Oh, man!  That stuff if vomit!  Well, at least it makes you vomit.  I think.

HELP

                            Cam's Chapter

Yes I dyed my hair and cut it, everyone on my basketball team did. Mom and Dad are mad and Sydelle is Sydelle. I can't hang out with anyone beside Sydelle. When mom told me to explain myself, I said something I should have not. I said, "The only time you actually care about me is when I do something bad. You only care about Sydelle and Luna. You are never proud of me. You know if I run away tomorrow, you would not even care. There are a lot of things I want to tell you but I feel like I can't. I had a ballet award ceremony today and you didn't even come. I get to be Ursla in the next ballet performance. By the way Sam took me at to the movies afterwards".  Did you just hear want I said to my mom? I actually told her about my date. I just heard a knock on the door. Who is it? Is  it Sydelle? Is it Mom or is it dad?

P.S Sydelle is making me do a competition. I do not even know what it is about.

                   Teagan's Chapter

It was one Saturday afternoon. The palm trees were blowing in our backyard, and I had just put on my swimsuit to jump in our pool. I had just played with Twix, and I was so ready to jump in. But just then, I see Sydelle walk up to me. "Hey Teagan" She shouts. I smiled and walked over. But, she had her game face on. She talked to me about how we were having a competition with Cam and Connor. A water gun fight. Awesome. She decided to fill them up, and then, I'd shoot them. Perfect! I shot Cam and Connor so much, and they totally went down. It was great. Sydelle was super fast at filling up the water, too.

                      Sydelle's Chapter

So, I know that Teagan already told you her version of the story, but this is mine. So, first off, Cam & I get to the Tartal's house. "Hey Teagan!" I shout. No time for any funny business. This is war. I talk to her about how I brought some extra guns. Our game plan is One person fills the gun and the other shoots. This way, we work as a team and always have water being shot. 3, 2, 1, and the game begun! Teagan and I started out strong! We were taking them down! I was filling while my partner was shooting! Teagan had pretty good shot! She shot in the eye, mostly! Anyways, I was the main target and Conner was shooting like crazy! But, we weren't giving up. The team who gave up, lost. It was brutal, and Conner's team LOST! We won!!!

                    Conner's Chapter

What the?  It's my turn again? Man, that went fast.  I still soaking after being blasted with a water gun like 12 times! And the worst part, I ONLY GOT 3 HITS!  So, Tegan and Syedelle won!  But, I got 19 hits on those little boogers at Nerf war.  So, yeah that's my part of the story for now.  Okay, you now can go read Cam's  chapter now.  Is it a chapter though?

                                           Cam's Chapter

Hey! So after all it was just dad telling me that dinner was ready. I went with my sister to the Tartal's house. It was kind of awkward but Conner invited me in. I was like thanks. The nurf gun fight wasn't awesome because half the time  I didn't know what to do. I think Conner likes me because he always acts so nice In front of me. I have no idea why! Conner wasn't mad at me or anything though! So I told Conner do not worry we will get them back. Anyway my sister needs to be beaten in something. 

                    Tegan's Chapter

Hey! It's Teagan again. So, now that a new "chapter" has started, I better talk about the nerf gun war that happened at Crane Park. It was terrible. So, Connor had challenged us to a battle at the park. Cam and him got ready, and so did we. But, I didn't have many nerf guns. Just horseshoes, and those weren't the best to throw at people. So, we rounded up the nerf guns, and spied on Connor and Cam. They had no idea we were there. And boom, all of a sudden, we got them. But, it didn't turn out so well. Connor had crazy nerf guns! Sydelle will tell you the rest of what happned. 

                    Sydelle's Chapter

Hey there! It's Sydelle, again! That water gun war was totally epic! Did I tell you that yesterday, I went to the nerf gun war at Crane park with Conner, Cam, and Teagan? It was totally fun! Teagan & I used teamwork, of course, so Teagan filled the nerf guns, and I shot them. It was totally fun, and my team was prepared. Unlike the last war, we have a pretty good feeling that Tegan and I will win this one. At least...I hope we win. We can afford another slip. Anyways, back to the game. So, I totally went beast mode with the guns. And a few, "shots" later, the other team was actually on the floor because they couldn't handle us!!! We had them strangled and they begged for us to stop! HORRAY!!!!! We WON!!!! Oh no, now we have to have a tie-breaker game!