
The sky came crashing down. The bridges to Skypiea collided as lightning rumbled. Marines arrived at Skypiea as the whole island began to fall. We were falling from over 3000 feet high, and no one could save us...
3 weeks ago
Our group arrived at Angel Beach. The waves roared like a lion. The bright, burning sun shone down on the golden-yellow sand.
An enormous bridge made out of clouds led up to the upper yards of Skypiea. "This is the coolest place ever!" screamed Carter energetically. Jalen ran up the bridge and exclaimed, "The view is even better up here!"
"They say this is where people go to worship Enel, the Thunder God. This is where he is working with Makuta and is hiding in Skypiea right now," I explained.
We walked up the bridge and entered the clouds.
Suddenly, a huge beam of light shot past me. Thunderclouds gathered above me as a giant beam of lightning struck down at the bridge. We all jumped from the bridge and avoided the attack. Carter shot hundreds of fire bullets at the attacker, but they all missed. I enlarged my fist and sent a lightning-packed punch at the attacker and hit him right in the face. He was Enel, the Thunder God. "Rumble Rumble God's Judgement," cried Enel as thunderclouds gathered above us and a huge wave of lightning struck us.
Everyone but me had fallen. They were all electrocuted by the attack. I had eaten the Gum-Gum fruit, so I was made out of rubber. Rubber conducts electricity, so I didn't get hurt by the attack. "Nine-tailed Jinkuriki," I shouted as I transformed into the demon fox. I sprinted forward, blew air into my fist, compressed it and then fired. Enel was sent into the upper yard and was gone.
My friends were all okay. Carter said he found the Flower-Flower fruit in the sand and will give it to someone.
In the end, Lucia ate the fruit, and we went on to find Enel.
When we finally made it up to the upper yard, we were exhausted. There was a huge temple up ahead, so Carter and I went to check it out while the others rested. As we walked closer to it, the bigger it seemed to get. It had an endless amount of stairs leading toward the inside of the temple.
Inside, there was a huge bell, followed by a series of smaller bells.
When we were about to leave, something caught my attention. There was a small trapdoor on the floor. I opened it as steam hit my face.
A mumbling sound drifted into my ears. People were chanting something mysterious inside the underground temple. There were rows of seats lined up, facing a vast stage. On the stage was a human. He wore a tomoe ring on the bag and had a bandage around his head. "Everyone, I shall now present to you our ally, Makuta," shouted the human.
"God Enel, God Enel," the crowd chanted furiously.
"I have granted Makuta the soul fruit so he can steal people's souls," explained God Enel. This was the guy we were looking for. We quietly sneaked into the temple and crept towards Enel . Suddenly, something hit me in the back. I saw a colossal cyborg aiming its gun at me. Carter blasted it in the back with fire bullets. I enlarged my fist and used Gum-Gum Giant Pistol. I destroyed the wall, allowing us to escape. I called the others on my phone and they came almost immediately.
Lucia ran towards the cyborg and cried, "Cien Fleur." Giant arms sprouted from the cyborg's back and smashed it in the head. Rachel unsheathed her swords just in time to cut the cyborg's head off. God Enel charged forward and he unleashed a huge dragon made out of lightning. Elliot ran forward and cried, "Seventh Sword, Soul Cutter." A neon green light appeared from Elliot's sword as the lightning dragon was cut apart. "How'd you do that?" I asked.
"I ate the Revive Fruit," replied Elliot.
Several cyborgs appeared in front of Enel and started charging up for their radical beam attack. Elliot took complete control of the cyborgs and made them fire the radical beam at Enel. Enel turned into lightning and evaded the attack. Enel shot a beam of lightning at us when another beam of light appeared before our eyes. The marines were here! In the blink of an eye, we were surrounded by hundreds of marines. A large robot named Kuma walked toward us. "This robot has the Paw-Paw Fruit, the strongest there is," said one of the marines.
Lucia immediately cried Seis Fleur as hundreds started hitting marines. The arms then combined to make a pair of huge feet that stomped at the marines. Izzy drove around in her Ferrari, knocking marines to the side. Carter and I were working together to defeat Kuma. Kuma could shoot laser beams out of his palm. He had a cat paw shape on his palm, which allowed him to use attacks. Kuma compressed the air using his palm, which made it difficult to breathe. Carter lit up my arm as I fired a huge flame fist at Kuma.
Kuma solidified air using his paw, creating a barrier to block my attack. He collected energy in his palm as he released a tremendous wave of air that sent me flying. Elliot charged forward as he slashed the air, creating ghostly shockwaves that do severe damage. Kuma deflected it with one swing of his hand and then hit Elliot with Pressure Cannon. It left a mark on Elliot that would suffocate Elliot for a while. Jalen charged forward, gouging large pieces of rocks out of the ground. Jalen threw them all at Kuma with some sort of telekinetic power.
"Gravity Blade," yelled Jalen as he sent a huge slash of air at Kuma. When the air touched Kuma, he was immediately pushed to the ground. Kuma climbed back up and used Paw Barrage. I jumped forward and used Gum-Gum Balloon. I turned into a giant balloon and recoiled the attack back at Kuma. Kuma stopped the attack by creating a large forcefield. Elliot dashed behind Kuma and used Soul Parade. Elliot zoomed in front of Kuma and slashed him apart. Jalen then gouged out a portion of the rock and made us float back to Angel's Beach.
At Angel's Beach, I found a tunnel leading to the upper yards. I told everyone about it, and we decided to head inside.
When we finally reached the top, Enel was waiting for us. Enel had set up camp right at the opening. "Rumble Dragon," cried Enel as a gigantic dragon made of lightning charged toward us.
"I'll take care of the dragon," shouted Elliot, charging toward the dragon. Elliot used One-Joint Slash to sever the dragon's head.
The dragon reattached its head and flew straight at Elliot. Enel used 20 Million Volt on Carter. Carter was electrocuted and fried in an instant. Rachel dashed forward with Charlene, Izzy and Lucia. They managed to hit Enel but didn't do damage. Enel scrambled to the side and used 30 Million Volt Thunder Bird. A huge bird made out of lightning started to attack Rachel, Charlene, Izzy and Lucia. "We'll take care of the bird. You guys take on Enel and his army," shouted Rachel, launching another slash at the thunderbird.
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The sky came crashing down. The bridges to Skypiea collided as lightning rumbled. Marines arrived at Skypiea as the whole island began to fall. We were falling from over 3000 feet high, and no one could save us...
3 weeks ago
Our group arrived at Angel Beach. The waves roared like a lion. The bright, burning sun shone down on the golden-yellow sand.
An enormous bridge made out of clouds led up to the upper yards of Skypiea. "This is the coolest place ever!" screamed Carter energetically. Jalen ran up the bridge and exclaimed, "The view is even better up here!"
"They say this is where people go to worship Enel, the Thunder God. This is where he is working with Makuta and is hiding in Skypiea right now," I explained.
We walked up the bridge and entered the clouds.
Suddenly, a huge beam of light shot past me. Thunderclouds gathered above me as a giant beam of lightning struck down at the bridge. We all jumped from the bridge and avoided the attack. Carter shot hundreds of fire bullets at the attacker, but they all missed. I enlarged my fist and sent a lightning-packed punch at the attacker and hit him right in the face. He was Enel, the Thunder God. "Rumble Rumble God's Judgement," cried Enel as thunderclouds gathered above us and a huge wave of lightning struck us.
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