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"Jack and Bradley The aliens of injustice"

Jack and Bradley are ready for another boring day at school, when out of nowhere, UFO’s came out of nowhere! They had to defend their town from the aliens, and the bridge of justice got shot down! When they graduated from high school, they got an award for doing the most work for rebuilding the bridge. This is rated 10/10 stars, so read this amazing book today!  
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SUPERPIG658
Nice good book i aggre with nick
funnyeagle1315
Love your book Rupin. I specially the part where you threaten the Alien with a pencil that was funny. You could maybe make the back round on page 2 like space with stars instead of the black back round.
pinkbat1328
I think the story was awesome but I think you should Show don’t tell at the end of page 2 “Jack and Bradley are twins”.
schultzroom8
they seemed identical in every way imaginable...
sweetsheep1272
Wow! Your book is great. I love the detail and the show don’t tell. Have you considered telling more about the characters. But its still amazing you should make a second book!
saltycougar1210
I think your book has a lot of detail and is very creative
schultzroom8
suggestion?
spicycow1329
I really loved your booked and how you put a lot of thought into it.
schultzroom8
what is your suggestion?
fasttiger1335
It is a great book but had you made suggested to maybe make small chapters for each part and split it?
schultzroom8
chapter book may be whats coming next...
greycrow1158
I LIKE THE BOOK AND THE ACTION. IT WAS REALLY COOL
schultzroom8
what was really cool?
wildhamster1146
My suggestion is that on page 10 you can add more about how the ufo was going why.i liked about this book is that you added about of characters and a lot of sounds and moves
schultzroom8
he did use great description with the noises and sounds
ultraotter1309
I love the book and why a pencil how did the alien get scared of a pencil a pencil
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