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I would like to dedicate this book to my mother who helped me learn to be responsible and take care of things on my own. I love you Mom!

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"Responsible Rosie"

Rosie, a fourth grader, struggles with responsibility but learns to be more independent and reliable through her daily routine and receives a puppy as a reward.  
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g38144
Cool story.
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Raesa Azalea Muhammad Taufiq (Zhenghuaps)
I really enjoyed reading your book.
eniel318
Awesome story! Please write another one.
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Elaida Seven
Awesome story! Please write another one.
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Dr. Gair
Ally, it has been rewarding following your journey!
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Stephen Marino
Ally, Congratulations you have created a fine book. I took the liberty of editing some the punctuation. Review the text one more time. Do not order your book. Dr. Gair will take care of this.
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Stephen Marino
Ally, You have done a fine job in writing this book. You are almost finished! I have a few editing suggestions: 1. On the dedication page, you need to write "who" instead of "that" for your mom. 2. You have lots of white space on pages 3.9.11, 17. 3. On page 5, you could use a graphic of the mother speaking the dialogue. This would fix the too large font size. 4. Check the entire text for inconsistency of font size, such as pages 12/13 5. On page 20, edit the text by eliminating wordiness: perhaps "After the first day of school...." I will check in a few days for further edits.
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Stephen Marino
Ally, You have made some good additions and edits to this. Cpntinue to edit the sentences. Also, review some of the white space on some pages.
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Stephen Marino
I made editing corrections on page 5 to show you what to do in the other pages.
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Stephen Marino
Ally, This promises to be a fine children's picture book. Your illustrations very much compliment the text. You need to edit the text in two ways: 1. For correct punctuation. This is important. 2. Some of the text is still wordy and you can simply some of the sentences. In addition, check the lay for blank spaces/areas. Also, work on the glossary and dedication.
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